Writing Fiction: A Guide to Narrative Craft by Janet Burroway, Elizabeth Stuckey-French, Elizabeth Stuckey-French

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Preface

            To Instructors: About This Book

            To Students: About the Writing Workshop

1. Whatever Works: The Writing Process

Get Started

            Journal Keeping

            Freewriting

            Exercises

            The Computer

            The Critic: A Caution

            Choosing a Subject

Keep Going

A Word about Theme

            “Shitty First Drafts,” Anne Lamott

            *“Why I Write,” Joan Didion

Writing Exercises

2. Seeing is Believing: Showing and Telling

Significant Detail

            Writing about Emotion

Filtering

The Active Voice

Prose Rhythm

Mechanics

            *““Big Me,” DanChaon

            “The Things They Carried,” Tim O’Brien

            “Where Are You Going, Where Have You Been?,” Joyce Carol Oates

Writing Exercises

3. Building Character: Characterization, Part I

The Direct Methods of Character Presentation

Appearance

Action

Dialogue

            Summary, Indirect, and Direct Dialogue

            Economy in Dialogue

            Characterizing Dialogue

            Other Uses of Dialogue

            Dialogue as Action

            Text and Subtext

            “No” Dialogue

            Specificity

            Format and Style

            Vernacular

Thought

            “Gryphon,” Charles Baxter

            *““Every Tongue Shall Confess,” ZZ Packer

            *““Rock Springs,”  Richard Ford

Writing Exercises

4. The Flesh Made Word: Characterization, Part II

The Indirect Methods of Character Presentation

            Authorial Interpretation

            Interpretation by Another Character

Conflict between Methods of Presentation

            The Character Journal

            The Universal Paradox

Credibility

Purpose

Complexity

Change
Reinventing Character
Creating a Group or Crowd
Character: A Summary

             *““A Visit of Charity,” Eudora Welty

            “Bullet in the Brain,” Tobias Wolff

            *“Tandolfo the Great,” Richard Bausch

Writing Exercises

5. Far, Far Away: Fictional Place

Place and Atmosphere

Harmony and Conflict Between Character and Place

Place and Character
Place and Emotion

Symbolic and Suggestive Place
Alien and Familiar Place

An Exercise in Place

             * ““The English Pupil,” Andrea Barrett

            * “Wickedness,” Ron Hansen

            * “Love and Hydrogen,” Jim Shepard

Writing Exercises

6. Long Ago: Fictional Time

Summary and Scene

Revising Summary and Scene

Flashback

Slow Motion

            “The Swimmer,” John Cheever

            “Mrs. Dutta Writes a Letter,” Chitra Banerjee Divakaruni

            “A Serious Talk,” Raymond Carver

Writing Exercises

7. The Tower and the Net: Story Form, Plot, and Structure

Conflict, Crisis, and Resolution

The Arc of the Story

Patterns of Power

Connection and Disconnection

Story Form as a Check Mark

Story and Plot

The Short Story and the Novel

Readings as Writers

            “The Use of Force,” William Carlos Williams

            “Happy Endings,” Margaret Atwood

            “Everything That Rises Must Converge,” Flannery O’Connor

Writing Exercises

8. Call Me Ishmael: Point of View

Who Speaks?

            Third Person

            Second Person

            First Person

To Whom?

            The Reader

            Another Character

            The Self

            Interior Monologue

            Stream of Consciousness

In What Form?

At What Distance?

Consistency: A Final Caution

            “Orientation,” Daniel Orozco

            “Who’s Irish?,” Gish Jen

            * “Gusev,” Anton Chekhov

Writing Exercises

9. Is and Is Not: Comparison

Types of Metaphor and Simile

Metaphoric Faults to Avoid

Allegory

Symbol

            The Symbolic Mind             

            * “The First Day,” Edward P. Jones

            * “Hotel Touraine,” Robert Olen Butler

Writing Exercises

10. I Gotta Use Words When I Talk to You: Theme

Idea and Morality in Theme

How Fictional Elements Contribute to Theme

            "A Man Told Me the Story of His Life," Grace Paley

Developing Theme as You Write

            * "Winky," George Saunders

            “This Is What It Means to Say Phoenix, Arizona,” Sherman Alexie
Writing Exercises

11. Play It Again, Sam: Revision

Re-Vision

Worry It and Walk Away

Criticism and the Story Workshop

Revision Questions

Further Suggestions for Revision

Examples of the Revision Process

           * “Notes on Keith” and draft of “Keith,” Ron Carlson

Writing Exercises

Appendix A: Kinds of Fiction

Appendix B: Suggestions for Further Reading

Credits

Index